You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. |
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It is hard choice between jewelry and a concert since I’ve never thought about it before and I love both of them, but when I must to make decision, I would choose tickets to a concert. Attending a concert gives me a valuable memento and releases my stress. First, attending a concert is something valuable that can’t be lost and will forever kept on a brain as a memory. When I attended a concert of my favorite rock band for first time, I just loved it. Though five years have passed since I participated, I would never forget about it. I just can’t. It remains on my heart as the happiest memento in my life that can be neither forgettable nor exchangeable. Whenever I imagine the time I was at concert, it just makes me feel happy and helps me to escape from all the troubled thoughts. Second, attending a concert released my entire stress that I had from teachers, friends, parents, and my sister. The rock concert was extremely noisy that I couldn’t even hear a word spoken from a person right next to me. There was no one who bothered me. I was free and all I concerned was my favorite rock band. I sang along with the rocker, waved my hands, and shook my head too. It was amazing experience and I would never forget that. For a while, I was only concentrating on rock that I felt as if I was in a different world. Third point that a ticket to a concert is more valuable than buying a piece of jewelry is because you can’t lose it. Though jewelry looks a lot attractive and precious than a concert ticket, it is not even comparable to it. Once you lose jewelry or get bored of it, jewelry is no more valuable, whereas attending a concert would remind as a memory forever. Jewelry doesn’t release a person’s stress, or maybe for a few days, but concert does. Cost of jewelry can deflate easily, but memory of concert can’t. As a conclusion, I strongly prefer a ticket to a concert. That doesn’t mean I’m not a man of out of fashion but I just consider memory worth more than a large amount of money. Experience, time, memento, memory, past . . . these are the matters that can’t be exchanged with money. They are like a time machine that can transfer to past. Since there is no such thing invented yet, I have to take out one by one of my memories and start imagining time that occurred to me. And I’m sure I’ll find it much more valuable than a piece of jewelry that can be bought and made anytime.
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