0028 (AD) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. |
People have their own ideas about the public media that concentrates on famous people. Although some people say, it is granted for paying attention to them because, many people want to know about their lives, but I strongly believe it is wrong because, too much concerning toward them is consider personal invasion and it can be considered so excessive behavior. Noticing their lives without their approval can cause the problem of personal invasion. Although many people are interested those notices and the news about their personal lives are very interesting to many people, but it is illegal. For example, we can see the news about the stars in magazines, newspaper or television and we used to say about their family’s appearance or grade when they were student. However, we should know about it and we should know that they are same person like us, so they don’t want it. In this way, the famous people can be affected much stress from media. Too much informing about the famous people can be considered excessive behavior. Through the media, they can be concentrated from many people. However, there are many people who do not want. For example, the good news is helpful to raise their image, but if the bad news are spread, they feel so shameful and angry because they don’t want those news. Therefore, too much concerning is not good. This is another reason why disagree with above the statement. To sum up, noticing the famous people’s life like popular star or politician can be considered the problem of personal invasion and too much informing is excessive behavior. If we can speak convincingly, we can get all the great benefits mentioned above. Taking all of these things into account, I can definitely say that too much paying attention is not good behavior. |
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