Describe an object that is very important in your life. Explain why it is important to you. Include details and examples to support your explanation. |
Everybody has their own important object in their life. Among all the various object I have, the one that I love best is my computer. First of all computer is useful for finding information. Computer's most important function is internet because users can find information at internet. Therefore I use internet to get a hint about my homework. For an example, if you are trying to solve the history project, you can find enormous amount of information at internet. And you pick a significant sentence that helps your history project. The another reason I love computer is that I can do my hobbies. My hobby is collecting cute or lovely pictures. I usually collect animation pictures. I can collect pictures easy and fast in the computer, because many people show there own pictures at internet. So by using my computer I can develop my hobby. Therefore computer is my most significant thing in my life. Because it helps my project and hobbies. |
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