you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change |
In our hometown, it has been controversial which things should be changed. However, I basically aurgue that most important things that have to be changed are building a new library and subway station. I will illustrate these assertions more in detail from now on.
Most of all, I strongly claim that the hometown has a new library. As a matter of fact, there is already a current library, but this facility is very old and accomodates few new books, so many people is undergoing difficulty to searching up - dated information. Accordingly, If I can do it, I will build the state of art library, which possible to have lots of new books. For example, When I was in high school years, I am given very hard homework, which need the materials about new biology theory. Other student can solve the problems by internet search, but it is very difficulty for me to settle the homework depends on materials of a current library because I do not have computer, which could run the internet networking in my home. After all, I got low score of the subejects, and from this experience, I conclude that new library is needed for the search of new information.
In addition, I think there should be subway station. Generally, In city which has subwaystation, there are less traffic jam, and it lead citizen to feel comfortable when they are commuting. Moreover, advent of the subway have a positive effects on citizen`s wealth, because the subway fee is very affordable compared to other transportaiton such as bus and car. As a result, building the subway station positively affects the economy and environment of the community. For instance, I read that 2005 CITI journals says that 88% of people of my city prefer to use subway rather than others as transportation vehicle. From this data, I convince that most important things changed in my hometown is to build new subway.
In a fact, just as the english proverb goes "a coin has two sides", there are some problem of my opinion. However, I basically think the city may have better solution to solve some problems my hometown people frequently face by building new library and subway station. |
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