Because modern life is very complex, young people should have the ability to plan and organize. |
In modern society, it has been controversial whether or not young people must develop their ability to project their plan. However, I bascially disagree with this position that it is important for children to have planning skill. This is because our world is becoming unpredictable, and most crucial factor to survive in complicated society is not planning ability, but for activity. I will illustrate these reasons in more detail from now on.
Most of all, In modern times, everythings of our world are too complex to project the future of those. As a matter of fact, rate of change is very fast compared to past time. Moreover, new concept made continually by advance of technology cause people to hardly predict their future. Accordingly, planning and orgaziging ability are useless for young people who live in modern times. For example, when I was in highschool years, I have read Modern research journal says there are concepts, which newly appeared, and 76.5% of these concepts are disappeared in a 5 years. From these information, I conclud that too fast speed of change in world make planning and orgazining their future to be useless.
In addition, there is more important factors to live in modern society, especially activity. Generally, planning takes a long time, and it has high possibility to impede people to practice their activity. To be specific, planning may be considered time consuming for doing their important works. As a result, most people have to possess ability to practice their work rather than just planning skills. For instance, I liked to plan works related to me since I was young. However, somtimes I do not realize the amount of time that I spend on doing planning, and it negatively affects my works. it might be considered very limited experience, but From my experience, I convince that important thing to do well with work in complex society is activity compared to planning.
In a fact, just as the english proverb goes "a coin has two sides", there might be some problems of my opinion. In contrast, I convince that we would be able to find out better solution about these issue by leading children to have acitivity, not planning. This is becuase |
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