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It is interesting for me to talk about people should allow to use cell phones at public transportations. Some people agree with it, while others disagree with it. As for me, I disagree with it for two reasons; to adapt In addition, using cell phones makes it possible for people to be free from the boring time. The more the city becomes bigger, the more it took longer time to move to other places due to the numerous numbers of cars at the limited roads. This compelling situation forces me to look for some methods such as make the limitations of using one's cars and suffering something to enjoy their moving time. In other words, using cell phones enables people to spend the time with great joy and then to be free from the stress which comes from boring. For example, I am used to use subways to went to the downtown of my city. I have to take both bus and subway to went to the downtown and it took at least about an hour. To sit at the chair without doing anything made me feel bored. I thought that it must be boring without my cell phones, because I used to use cell phones.I took conversations and sent text messages with my friends and family members. I also listened musics in my cell phone. This allow me to have fun time. Therefore, allowing people to use cell phones gives chances for people to use time more efficiently. In conclusion, I agree with it. This is because I can adapt well at unexpected circumstances and this is also because I can spend the time without boring. I would like to suggest to use cellphones in the public transportations.
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