11/09 미국 : the car(automobile) has had more effect on a society than the airplane has |
With the advent of the technology, many vehicles have been developed. By the development of transportations, society has improved dramatically. Both cars and airplanes are representative transportations of the 21st era. I think the car has much more impacts on the society than the airplane. First of all, although cars are not able to cross(transverse) the oceans, driving cars is pretty useful to move to other locations on ground than the airplane. By using the car, people are able to travel around their towns. The vehicle raises people's mobile ability and thus society is able to be advancing quickly. For example, when people travel a long distance by cars, people are able to arrive at their destinations with much more ease and quickness. Moreover, the transportation system can also be developing thanks to the mobile machines. These advantages of the cars have positive effects on the development of the society. For more objective evidence, I read a newspaper a few years ago, it said that the car is one of the most influential inventions in present society. When it comes to mobile ability, the airplane's ability is also excellent. However, the airplane is not as convenient as the car because using the airplane is harder and more dangerous. Moreover for using the airplane, the airplane road is often more than 10 km and right direction is needed. (needed a revise here) This requirement is too tiresome. Especially, riding airplane in urban city is quite limited because it sometimes causes dreadful accidents and makes noise. These drawbacks make using airplane difficult. On top of that, cars' maintainence cost is much cheaper than airplane's cost. Even, underprivileged classes have their own cars these days. (needed a revise here as well) If the car's maintainence fee is too expensive, nobody is able to use the car. As a result even though car's ability is very excellent, many people are not able to take advantage of the car's ability fully because it maintain fee is a big burden to people like airplane. However, fortunately this assumption differ from reality. Now, many people are using their own car. According to a research conducted at New York University in 2007, more than 80 percent of the respondents who are living in the United States replied that they have their own car. If it were not for own car, it is very hard to live in urban city, in these days. Some people against my opinion might says that the airplane has more advantage than the car. For example, the airplane is faster than the car in long distance. Also, the airplane is able to move regardless of any trail. I partially agree with this refutation but the most drawback of the airplane is that it is quite costly. The low income classes are not use the airplane freely. In contrast, the car is much cheaper. Even some highschool students are using their own cars when they are attending school. To sum up, the car has had a positive effect on society for two reason: One is that car's ability is incomparably excellent because driving car is easy and safe. People are able to have many advantages from the car. Another is that car is much cheaper than airplane. For this reason, most people are able to use their own car easily.
Comment: 님아 자 practice 몇 개 해보죠... 둘 중 하나 고르세요.. -The society has been (developing/ developed) remarkably. -When comparing merits of both the airplane and the car, I came up with a notion that the airplane is (laborious/ more laborious) and (time-consuming/more time-consuming) - An apple is (tasty/ tastier) (then/ than) a banana
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