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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls shoul attend separate schools. Use specific reasons adn examples to support your answer. | |
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I had experienced to attend two types of schools for both sex and for only male in my middle and high school. Some say boys and girls should attend schools separately to avoid negative effects between each sex. However, I believe the type of school that both genders attend together has many advantages rather than disadvantages because of getting wider perspectives about human relationship and learning more about their study.
Both genders allowed school provide to students get a broad perspective in human relationship.
As we know, female and male have many differences physically and psychologically. While they are growing, they would get many chances to learn how they are different with each other. For example, generally, male is bigger and stronger physically than female, and female,in turn, has more sensitive and delicate characteristics psychologically than male. Students learn about their gaps naturally while they do not have far-sighted view enough. Probably, regardless of sex, the knowledge that they can get in this kind of schools will be great help after they enter a real world that occur many social activities, which both genders coexist.
Students learn more through the coeducation. During the courses of school, we get many types of projects, assignments and homework. Some could be done by oneself or a single gender, but some may be required discussion, cooperation, various opinions of other sex. When I attended a communication class in my high school that was only male-allowed, teacher asked us to research how to solve problems when they have troubles to communicate with people. As we discussed and asked each other who were only our classmates, the answers were just like 'playing sports together or hang out with.' In other word, through cooperation between genders, students would find further and broader results togegther.
While we are growing, we learn constantly about the relationship between male and female through many ways: how it work and how it effects with. Sometime, it entails arguments or fights because of uneasiness to understand the other gender. However, its difficulties could be minimized through attending both sexes-allowed schools because students get a far-reaching veiewpoint about human and it wil be benefit to their study as well.
공부하면서 부족한 실력으로 고쳐봤는데요 동의어들은 반복해서 쓰지 마시고 would 용법한번 다시 살펴보시고 문장이 길어지면 끊어서 쓰는 걸 한번 해보세요 that 으로 계속 연결하면 문장이 이상해집니다. | |
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