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When its statement comes to the question to me, what is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life. I would like to say, that is network because first reason is helping get the job, second reason is giving lucrative information.
First of all, I would like to say networking, because of helping get the job. There are many complex networking, such as same university, resign, and relatives. Korea people think that it is actual important factor for living the life. Sometimes, to get job uses the this relationship, among the most people. Our country limits the hiring people, too narrow, shortage, usually the young have a trouble getting the job. In my case, when I graduated the university , I suffered from gaining the occupation. I did drop it, more than any other people, too many. I felt like to think, why I must fail to enter the job, kill myself, the company, at that time, eventually I got the insomnia. My father saw the me, too poor, through the route, he gave the profitable chances, after all I get the job.
Moreover, I would like to assert the network, because of giving lucrative information. Most people agree, network is a success of methods, the load of success, for winning the own field. In my case, I works in stock company, which deems broad, truth information, the same the life, for getting the profit, thus the most important property. Sometimes, some people have fail , due to the wrong news. Our discipline gives and takes the information with other people, who have a perils, usually false things, it is because of surviving the field, step by the people and go to high classes. But, network, such as same school, reign, never happen to the things, we are strong united by it. In my case, several months ago, through my network, make spectacle gains, which lead to promote my rank, abruptly high. Due to network, my success is possible to rise in rank.
In conclusion, I definite regard the network is the most important characteristic, because of getting the job as well as giving the lucrative information.
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