People attend college or university for many different reasons.Why do you think people attend college or university? |
Nowadays,the education level of world increase a bit and a bit and the people know that education is really important that could impact in society, so college and university are important for students recently.I have some opinions about the reasons why many people attend college or university. I tell you about the reasons into three sections. Firstly,many students have their visions that they want,so the first reason why they attend college is to accomplish their dreams.Some students might be attended to learn about unique subjects that hard to find and to learn.Currently,many companies and all the jobs that hire the people by attend college or not.So many students go to college to get jobs that the college can makes the way to get jobs at least is not so high payment.The companies or other kinds of job don't treat people who don't graduated college as a person.It the one of the important reasons. Secondly,nowadays medias like newspaper,internet,mobile and so on.They say that to be succeeded in life,in statistical,most of succeed people were graduated from all the best colleges or universities like Oxford,Stanford,Colombia,Havard,Yale and so on, so many people think that hard working for study to go to really fantastic college is the way to success.Many students gain to go to the great colleges,so many students study very hard for their future life. Crucially,recently, many big and famous companies,countries and the many minor enterprises look for talent and intelligent students in many colleges to hire in high payment to the students and develope the companies,so many students study very hard for good future and easy life and peaceful life. In conclusion,students in college that they have same reason about to live very comfortable life,peaceful life and plenty life
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