Some pwople prefer to spwnd most of their time alone. Pthers like to be with friends modt of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone of with friends? |
Some assess that people prefer to spend most of their time alone, while others stick to their guns by saying that people like to be with friends most of the time. Just as there are two sides to every coin, people’s opinions concerning this matter are also divided. Their preference regarding this problem may be determined by various factors, such as its preference or practicality. First of all, those who insist that people like to spend time alone defend the supposition that persons can have quiet time to think about themselves. During this time, they will be able to know what they really want. Also, they want to enjoy their hobbies and take a rest. They can reduce stress that they get from exams, homework, and so on. Their claim is well-founded in that it is based on some substantial reasons. However, my opinion on this matter is a little different. As far as I am concerned, I would like to insist that spending time with friends is more valuable. One of the main reasons why I hold this opinion is that it helps us to learn about how to live with other people. We don’t live alone during our lifetimes. Meeting friends is very useful to build a social network. Therefore it is very important to gain these skills. I could think of another reason, which is that friends are the most valuable property. They always help me with my difficult problems and celebrate with me when good things happen. Also, while spending time with friends, I get a lot of good ideas and I form wide interpersonal relationships. Let me talk about one good example that has come to my mind on the spur of the moment. Two years ago, my best friend’s father died because he had cancer. My friend doesn’t have many relatives. So, my other friends and I helped him in various ways, like fund-raising and comforting her. After a month, my friend told me that he felt very thankful for his friends and he realized the preciousness of having friends. Come to think of it, the opinions of others might be worth listening to. Furthermore, in reality, the golden mean which aims at compromise between the two choices might be an alternative. But, mostly for the reasons I have mentioned above, I am sure that my opinion is not a far cry from the given topic. To sum it all, after much concern, I would like to stake out my claim on the conclusion that spending time with friends is better than spending most of their time alone. 이 형식이 서론 - 그 다음 나의 반대의견의 내용 - 그다음 나의 주장 - 결론 이렇게 좀 다른 형식으로 쓴 에세인데여~~ 이런 형식 어떨지 평가좀 부탁드립니다^^;;; 이런 형식으로 작성해도 괜찮을 까여????? |