Why do you think people attend college or university?
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Universities are often called the cradel of academic studies. That is, they provide a range of subjects which are more advanced than highs school contents. Moreover, through university life, studetns can learn many social skills by taking part in clubs. I think that's why people want to go to colleges. Universities can give not only high quality education, but a chance to learn how to be a member of society.
-> It is often said that universities are the cradle of knowledge. In other words, they provide variety of more advanced subjects than high school ones. Moreover, attending clubs through university life enable students to learn social skills. This is why I think people desire to go to colleges. Not only can universities give high leveled education, but also suggest an opportunity of knowing the way to be a member of society.
First of all, Students can expand their knowledge span in uiversity. Since university contains a lot of majors, students can build up their knowledge and find a new life direction. Also, for example, many universities in my country are now renovating their whole systems, such as giving students more chances to transfer majors, strengthening the policy of electives, and providing exchange student programAll of those policies are beneficial for students to broaden their views of learnings. In addition to that, students can realize their real interests through university system. That will enable them to make much wiser choice for career in the future. This clearly shows that college is very useful for people to knock-on unforseen doors of information.
-> More than anything else, university makes it possible for students to broaden their knowledge base. University has many majors, so it helps students to find a new life direction as well as to build up their academic information. Also, for instance, many colleges in my country are trying to change their whole systems into better ones, such as more chances to transfer majors, to choose electives and to study abroad. It is these policies that strengthen students to have much wider view of study. In addtion to that, the university system encourage its students to realize their interest, enabling them to make much wiser choice for future career. This clearly shows that people can make use of college to knock-on unforseen doors of knowledge.
On top of that, students are able to to experience social life indirectly. As socieites are getting more diverse, many clubs in university are keeping their steps with this social tendency. When I was in college, I joined one of the clubs. I could experience many activities like helping the poor and building small houses of seniors. I planned schedule and led many students being under my umbrella because of my postion, president. Through activities, I could learn the way to control my group, and to maintain the unity of members. Judging from my experience, it is obvious that college life is helpful to develop many social skills.
-> Next, attending universities enable students to experience social life in an indirect way. With the increased social diversity, many clubs in university are keeping their steps with this social tendency. I joined one of clubs when I was in college. I could take part in many services such as giving my hand to the poor and making shelters for senior citizens. I, president, was in charge of planning schedule and leading many students under my control. This experience taught me the way to order my team, and to keep the conformity of members. From personal experience, it is obvious that college is advantegeous to develop many social skills. (결론은 작성안함.)
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