Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? why?
독학이다 보니 조언이 많이 필요합니다,,,, 한 몇점정도 나올까요 ? 문법적으로 틀린곳이랑 말이 안되는 곳 마구마구 지적부탁드려요 |
In this rapidly changing world, there is no doubt that children should be educated to adjust in their society and enjoy their life. However, there are a lot of arguments that when children should start their formal education. I strongly believe that children should be educated in early age and spend most of their time in schools to study because it is more efficient to learn a foreign language as soon as possible. Moreover, to make up sound personality, education in early age is necessary. A foreign language, essential skill to adjust globalized world, can be learned effectively as early as they start to study. Children have special language acquire ability, which will disappear when they grow up Children can also learn foreign languages easily during this period. The survey, researched by Korean Language Institution, compares the ability to use second languages between students. The result tells that earlier students start to study, more fluently they can speak. To attain second language, necessary in this world, children should start their formal education as soon as possible. More over, childhood is decisive period to form one’s personality. Right educations, which can be provided through school curriculums, positively effect to build up one’s characteristic. For example, I believe that honest is the most important thing in the relationship between people so I have tried to do my best to be honest. I learned it when I was an 8 year-old boy in elementary school. One’s characteristic, formed early in childhood by fine education, have great power to change whole life through. To conclude, I firmly believe that formal education in early age is necessary for children because it is more effective to learn a foreign language and establish right personality. Childhood is important period to prepare future. We have to provide qualified education in their early age to help them grow up well and finally achieve their dream. |