There has been an argument regarding the issue that attending a live performance should be place ahead of viewing same event on television. Some people insist that watching it through television at home is more convenient. However, from my perspective, directly attending a performance is much more valuable experience than just watching it on television. In this essay, I will present two reasons for my idea.
First of all, attending a live performance allows us to be more excited and delighted.
Generally speaking, it is true that directly involved in some live performances is far away from convenience since we have to buy the tickets for the events and go to the place where it is performed. Nevertheless, because of the interact with the performers and other audiences, it generates true communication between people who are sharing the time there all together and pure excitement. In contrast, sometimes viewing some great event on television alone at home makes us to feel lonely. That is why people choose to go to their favorite musician’s concerts and sports games even if they have to wait long hours or take a long distance trip.
Moreover, viewing a performance lively makes a special memory which can last for a life time. In general, the performances which broadcasted on television are able to everyone who has this machine. Consequently, if you saw Olympic Games through screen of television, it does not mean something special. However, if you attend a small jazz concert with special person such as your friends, family, or girl/boy friend, it can be remembered as a precious event in your life. Unlike a television program, this cannot be replayed again.
In conclusion, attending a live performance involved healthy interactions with people who are attending a same event together and unforgettable memories. Hence, watching a live performance via television cannot be better than attending it directly. It is a matter of whether being an onlooker or participant of the event.
Let us imagine, your most loved artist having a last concert and your sweetheart also love to see it. Then are you going to suggest her or him to go home to see the artist's concert on television screen?
마지막 문단으로 2가지 종류가 생각났는데, 어째 두가지 모두 어딘가 어색한 것 같기도 하고, 엉뚱한 것 같기도 하네요 ^^; 도토리 키재기인 것 같지만, 그나마 나은 것 이 뭘까요 ?
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