You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. 집 구입 vs. 사업체소유
If I have enough money, I would definitely buy a business rather than a house, especially a sports center. The reason is that a sports center will unquestionably provide people with healthier life. Moreover, it can also increase the opportunities for many people to have jobs in this economic slump.
First of all, a sports center will surely guarantee the people’s health. As a sports center has a wide variety of sports programs such as running, swimming, dancing, and even aerobics, these various kinds of exercises may improve people’s health by satisfying everyone’s favor for sports. What is more, by enjoying the sports, people can relieve their stress.
Moreover, a sports center may present a considerable number of jobs for unemployed people in the community. For example, a big sports center was built last year in my neighborhood, OOO. This gave an absolute solution for unemployment problems in OOO, by providing various kinds of jobs such as teachers in each exercise, cashier, waitress… etc.
Without the slightest hesitation, I prefer to buy a business, namely sports center, to give people with healthier life and more augmented opportunities for employment. All in all, a true business is a business that improves everyone’s quality of life.
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