#17 it is better to spend time with one of two close friends than with a largle number of friends [words 346]
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Throughout people's life, most people always interact with other people. Also, people make many friend. Commonly, the word "friend" means that person who very familiar with me and we can share many privacy because friends fully believe each other. There are some people who make friend merely one or two. On the other hand, others make a lot of friends. Of the two methods, I think the latter is advantageous to live in modern society. To start with, Having a variety of people is very beneficial to live. In modern times, there are a variety problems and a variety of tasks. If I have some problems are related with unfamiliar field, I may have hard time. However, if I have a friend who is familiar with the field, I can solve the problem easily thank to the help of my friend. Some people against my suggestion might say that, in most cases, the person who are having too many friends cannot make only one a genuine friend. Also, It is very difficult making a large number of genuine friends. I partially agree with this refutation but anyone feels that making a believable friend is difficult. Rather, making a variety friends is better than making a few friend. On top of that, having good relation skill is needful to live, expecially these who are in business. According to a newspaper i read weeks ago, many successful ceo acclaim that making good relationship is one of the most important skill to success. Also, good relation skill is one of the most needful skill. If i have experience in making friends, i will easily learn good relation skill. According to a research conducted at New York University in 2007, one of the famous and reliable University in the United States, more than 70 percent of respondent who is one of the successful person all over the world replied that having a large number of believable people is more important than having a large number of utility. From this research, i think making a large number of friend is better.
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