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81. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
I largely agree with the above opinion that technology has developed the world until now. Even though it has caused some problems such as many traffics or serious pollution(오염 단수였나;), it is certain that people receive many benefits (s가능한지...) from it as well; the enormous development of agricultural technology, the increase of people's life span. Most of all, it has greatly (이자리 맞죠?;;) effected for people to extend their life span. In the past, many patients had to die without any medical treatment due to the lack of medical knowledge and frequent wars. However, nowadays, thanks to the development of the Technology, people can get a proper treatment in the near hospital(nearby?near? 어느게 더 적합한가요?) when they have an illness and previously prevent infectious diseases. Additionally, it has led the development of the agriculture. Contrary to the past, farmers cultivate the land efficiently with the agricultural machines. These convenient machines help farmers make good quality and enormous crops. Because of that(앞문장 전체를 받을때 that이랑 it 중 어느걸 써야 하나요), people can meet various and fresh fruits and vegetables (둘다 복수가능?) in the nearby market at any time.(그냥 at 빼고 any time이라고 붙여도 상관없나요?) For these reasons, I strongly support the idea as I stated above. Thanks to the technology, people could make important achievement in two areas; agricultural and medical area. It provides people to live longer and eat good quality food everyday. |