It has recently been announced that a new high school may be bulit in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? why? |
It is generally said that buliding a new school will be positive influence on the local community. Some people might disgree this statement with it makes loud noise while on construction. However I'm in favor of the new policy given by the local goverment that a new school will be constructed in my local community because it gives us education of good quality and can makes students to save the money.
First of all, presence of a new school allows us to have good circumstance of education. To put it again, the new facilities of new school are not only pretty clean but also ultramodern equipment. So students will can study with very good quality. Even though some people might say that it is not necessarily true, however I have following examples that can surpport my opinion. According to the survey recently released from Education Ministry in Korea, it explains that the fifty highest highschools at the average score of all students are aslo present to students high quality circumstance of education. Conversly , there's no the school that is good at the average score of all students with have old-fasioned campus facilities. As a examples shows above , if local goverment build a new high school with newest-fasioned equipments, the local students will enjoy this splendid quality of education.
Futhermore, the new policy that to bulid a new high school helps students to save the money to go school located so far. In other word, most of students who live in the town that has not local high school apt to spend money so much to use transfotation system such as bus or subway. To illustrate my little brother who is 3greade in highschool now on's personal experience, there was no high school until 1years ago. Naturally, he had been studying in the other local school that is very far from our house. So he had to paid lots of money for using bus to school. In contrast, after finished the construction of new local high school 1years ago, he transferd from other local school to the new high school located in my town. Of course, he need not pay transfotation fee to go school any more. As example I mentioned, it makes students who have to study in other local school to save the extra money.
To sum up what I have said until now on, I strongly believe that buliding a new school has more advantages thatn disadvantages to local society. The reasons behind this are that it allows students to use reinforced education facilities, furthermore it makes students to save time. All thing considered, there's no doubt in my mind that no one can deny this benefits by constructing a new high school in my town.
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