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There is a lot of controversy whether living in a dormitory or an apartment where located on off-campus. Some people prefer to live in a dormitory, while others are eager to live in an apartment. Each choice has advantages and disadvantages. But, I strongly believe that the advantages of living in a dormitory far outweigh the living in a apartment. I am going to demonstrate why I prefer living in a dormitory by offering several reasons and examples.
To begin with, it is obvious fact that by living in a dormitory, students can have convenience for attending class. Namely, students who live in a dormitory do not need to suffer from traffic jam for attending class. This is because they do not need to use public transportation such as subway, bus or taxi. Although, they who live in a apartment in which located close with campus would ride a bicycle or foot a walk, the convenient of those who live in a dormitory is much more superior then others for attending class. My friend is primary example. He always late a class by traffic jam for last semester. As a result of that, he got a poor score to business professor. In addition, he always said that I rally want to live in a dormitory. This reflects that living in a dormitory is much better then living in a apartment.
On top of that, living in a dormitory is much better for health than living in a of campus house. Because, they can maintain their health by regular eating habit and nutrient food that offered by dormitory. According to the some research, the body health mostly depends on eating habit and nutrition of food. Especially, the dormitory of my university is suitable as typical example. The dormitory of my university is qualified from the Staple Food Control Center, as the best dormitory in my city, because it supply balanced-diet to students in the morning and at lunch. Therefore, given the choice living in a dormitory and off-campus apartment, I would choose living in a dormitory.
In conclusion, the reasons why I prefer to live in a dormitory are convenience for attending class and balance-diet. If there were not excellent dormitory in my university, a number of students would sufferd from inconvenient and unbalanced food. Therefore, if I have chance to live in a dormitory, I am willing to live in this place. |
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