Some people may say that firms should do anything they can to make a
profit. However, I have a different idea. I believe that companies need to
conduct everything they can to make a profit. (첫 번째 문장과 다른 생각이라고 하시면서 다음 문장에선 첫 문장의 주장을 다시 적으셨습니다) First, their primary goal is to
earn a lot of money. Second, revenue is an essential factor for companies because companies have to support their workers.
To begin with, in order to increase a their wealth, companies ought to do anything they can
because the prime objective to manage companies
is to get lots of revenue. In other words, firms need lots of money to survive
in managing their company. If they do not have
enough money, companies are likely to go bankrupt,
since they need to provide employees with
wages and pay for the building rent fee. For
example, Wan Publish Company in south Korea, which made books, failed to survive in harsh conditions because they made less a profit in selling
books. In the end, they went bankrupt. This is because the companies that earn less money normally
fail to maintain themselves in society.
Furthermore, businesses
should conduct anything they can to get money because they have to support their employees. (이미 위 본문에서 한 번 명시한 내용입니다) To be specific, by giving workers salary, they are able to
live stably. However, the if a company
cannot afford to pay for their salary, office
workers would have a hard time living. For instance, my father worked for LG
Electronics. During greate the great depression,
the company could sometimes not offer wages for workers. So, our family were
was faced with harsh problems. When we used up our saved
money, we could not purchase food and paid also
could not pay for school tuition. If I continued not to not pay for tuition, I would have had to drop out of school. Fortunately, because my
father could find another job, he was able to
support our family again. Therefore, it is inevitable for companies to act do anything
to make a profit.
To sum up, companies' primary goal is to earn money and
companies are responsible for making employees'
life stable. Therefore, in this regard, I strongly agree that businesses should
do anything they can to make a profit.