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Some people believe that Information from the Internet
and magazines are an (are an 이라는 건 없습니다)important factor. However, I disagree with this opinion.
Recommendation from friends are most important. This is because they provide
trustworthy information and are more aware of each other’s particular taste.
First of all, we can hear candid reviews from our
friends. Online is likely to be somewhat biased by an exaggerative
advertisement. Online markets also buy good reviews, but friends can honestly
tell you about the product because they used it themselves. Therefore, we are
given frank comments by our friends.
For example, in my experience, I usually read a lot of
reviews when I buy a product. I bought it because there were many good reviews.
However, it was all false reviews. On the other hand, I bought the product that
my friend used and recommended. The product was very good.
Also, they who already aware of my taste can recommend
things that suit each other’s taste.
This is mainly because, close friends tend to share
similar interests. In this sense, it is highly likely that they purchased the similar
product as me.
Therefore, they already know the thing that I want,
and they can explain the advantages and disadvantages of the product. Furthermore,
you can save the time by asking the information you want. In fact, according to
an article, a survey found that many people felt more satisfaction when they
purchased goods on the recommendation of their acquaintances than when they
bought them after seeing a review or advertisement. In conclusion, they provide
us with more reliable information, and they have the same interests, so they
can recommend products that suit our personal tastes. In this regard, I insist
that recommendations from friends have the most influence over major purchasing
decisions.
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