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The lecturer discusses the advantages to home-schooling, based on the results from researches. The benefits of home-schooling include the auspicious quality of education the subject goes through, and the enhancement of social development. This is contrary to the claim of the reading passage that home-schooling causes dissatisfactory results.
First of all, the professor argues that home-shooling could positively influence a person academically. According to researches, people who undergo home-schooling are highly educated, and show much higher test results, about thirty percent higher than average. He also states that these students become actively involved in studying, selecting classes of their best interest, and preparing diligently for evaluations. This refutes the passage's proposition that home-schooling often does not teach the required course a person needs to take.
On top of that, the lecture says that home-schooling improves a student's ability to socialize. The lecturer argues that - as certain researches suggest - students learn how to get along with others. As homeschooled students spend time with adults, they tend to be much more responsible, confident, and mature. According to the professor, surveys show that they generally become active and resourceful people in their community. This contrasts the passage's statement that students who are homeschooled find themselves hard to adjust to community life.
Thus, the professor rebuts all the the claims given by the passage. Home-schooling, in his perspective, is a much more astute solution to students. By being taught in home, they could immerse more into studying, and also socialize with others without any problem. |