It is unrealistic for people to work at the same company for their entire lives. |
People often move the companies from one place to the other to benefit their salary. It may be unrealistic to stay in one company, but I disagree with this idea because people are stable while they stay in same company. Also, it is easy to deal with problems if they work at the same company for their entire lives. First of all, going to the same company will make business men to have stability. By working in one company for whole lives, boss well knows and admits the men. There may be opportunities to succeed from help of boss. In It is easy to overcome with predicaments if they stay one company. As the work will be familiar, they can readily complete the task that is given rather than working on new kinds of work. The experience in the same company aids them to resolve the problems easily. For example, my grandfather knew various employees from other companies because he often met them officially. It was very simpler to carry on contract with acquaintance than someone who was unfamiliar. By using this advantage, he continued make contract with many companies and remained in the company for long time until he retired later. Therefore, he became a successful, rich man. Familiarity helps people to succeed rather than attempting to change everything often. In conclusion, stability and familiarity supports people to easily be prospect to become successful. I firmly think remaining at the same company has advantages to people, so it is realistic. Thus, the best way to consider about their future and family is to stay in the same company. |
한 10분 초과했네요.. 막 초과하는 시간이 늘어나는듯.
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저번에 코멘트 올려주신 jjj님과 ethereal 님. 감사해요.
님들 첨삭, 지적 참고해서 써봤어요.
아직도 해커스 structure 에 틀이 박힌 에세이 같지만;;
다른 sample 에세이 보면서 점점 노력할게요.
첨삭해주세요^^