일하는게 더 중요하냐, 가족들과 시간 보내는게 더 중요하냐? (고수님들 답변 부탁드려요 ㅠ) |
In this rapidly changing world, what people value can vary from person to person. Some people think that spending time at working place is more important and valuable while others think that spending time with their family is more significant. I'm inclined to agree with the latter since it can alleviate stress and I am convinced that affection between family members are the most important factor to sustain their lives in this society.
The first reason why I believe spending time with their family is more important is I can relieve stress that I can't escape from in the hubbub of my life. Since adults should work hard and children should study hard for succeeding, they are under much pressure. For example, from my personal experience, I'm tied up with my studying. That is to say, I always go to my cram school and study hard. That sometimes makes me stressful. However, if I came home after finishing my study, my parent always welcomes me with a smile. At that time, I feel that stress is already alleviated. As we can realize above, if we spend tremendous amount of time with our family members, we can forget all the nuisances that I had experienced in my daily routine and can alleviate stress.
Also, I believe that having time with family is more important since I'm the one who believe affection between family members is the most significant one for the maintenance of our lives. For example, If I quote from one scene of a movie, a man wants to suicide. Since he doesn't have any family because of car accident, he has to suffer some loneliness. That leads him to decide to suicide. I'm convinced that if he had a family, he doesn't have to kill himself. However since he lacks in affection between family members, he decided to do that. In other words, the suicide is largely attributed to lack of affection. To sum up, I believe using time and sharing love with family members can decide whether they sustain their lives or not. Thus, I think that it is more valuable to spend time with them.
Ultimately, I believe that the importance of spending time with family members outweighs the significance of working since I can relieve stress and feel affection between family members. However, since both of working and having time with families occupy important parts of our lives, we cannot fully value what is more worthwhile. |