■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : University should invest money on making good facility rather than hiring good teachers. |
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Some people might believe that university should invest money on hiring good teachers.
However, I personally disagree with the above idea for two reasons.
First, making good facility can improve academic performance of students.
Second, it also increases the quality of the lecture.
First, making good facility leads to improvement of students performance.
Students' performance is affected by many factors, such as their health and stress.
By investing on facility, the university can make students become less stressed and more healthy.
So they can focus on their study, and it leads to improvement of their performance.
Let me bring up my cousin's story as an example.
My cousin was good at study and engaged in very famous university.
Also the university he went was well known for very heavy load of study.
Whenever he finished his work at school, he seemed to be so exhausted.
One day, I asked him for the reason why he could continue his study even if it was so hard.
He replied that though it was so exacting, he could concentrate on his study because of university's good facility.
If the university had not had good facility, he could have ended up quiting his study.
On top of that, investing on facility enhances the quality of the lecture.
The primary role of the university and its professors is giving knowledge to students.
However, if equipment, such as acoustics and projectors, is poor, even though a good
teacher will have hard time on conveying their knowledge.
Thus, making good facility should be prioritized for teaching students.
According to survey done by Korea Education Department, 80% of professors replied
that improving facility is the most important factor for good university.
This is due to the fact that the quality of facility is crucial to teaching students.
This clearly shows that investing on facility can improve lecture's quality.
In conclusion, improving facility can improve students performance, and the quality of the lecture.
In this regard, university should invest money on making good facility.