▶ Your Answer :
Some people might
think that one cannot learn about a person just by knowing his or her friends’
type because they are not the same person. However, in my opinion, one can
acknowledge a person’s characteristic from the type of friends that the person
has. This is because people usually have a relationship with people who share
some similar aspects.
To begin with, people have a tendency to become
friends with people who have similar backgrounds, ways of thinking, and/or personalities. Imagine that you are in a party.
When you have a conversation with a person, and that person does not have much similarities with you, would it be
possible for you to continuing continue that
conversation? It is highly doubtful since you could would not even know what to talk about. Owing to that, since even starting a talk with a person without a
similarity is hard, it is not plausible to become a friend with a person who is
different with you. In this regard, when you see a group of people that share a
strong friendship with each other, you can think
that they are sharing similarities in diverse conditions, such as backgrounds,
personality, and values.
For example, one of my friends made a boyfriend recently. She wanted to show
him to us, so we made an appointment with her and her new boyfriend. When we
met him, he seemed sincere and honest. Also, we thought that he really fell in
love with her since he took care of her very sweetly. We told to her
that she was so lucky that she could meet a man of great personality. Since we
had a great time with him, he told to us that he wanted to hang over out with us and together
with his friends someday. We agreed, and
we made another appointment with him and his friends. When we met his friends
we were very surprised since his friends were too vulgar and rude. She said
that she could not understand why such a good man got along with bad guys. I
told her that it is not good to judge a person by his or her friends. She
agreed with me at first, however, as time goes went
by, she had arguments with her boyfriend frequently. One day, she told
me that she no longer regarded him as a good person like the first time. He
talked abusively, observed everything she was doing, and even used violence
against her. At the end, she broke up with him due to his affair and violence.
For this reason, since friends are sharing similarities with each other, it is plausible to learn about a person from the
type of the person’s friends. By doing so, we can know a person’s hidden
aspects.
Writing
0-30 Scale |
Good (24-30) |
Score |
26 |
Overall
Comment: |
포인트를 하나만 잡으셔서 조금
아쉬웠어요. 주장을 하나 더 추가해서 두 가지의 포인트를 다뤘으면 같은 말을 반복하지 않았을 수도 있을 것 같습니다. 문법 오류들도 조금
있으니 위 지적사항들을 참고하세요. |
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