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조금 전에 올린 에세이가 글자 수가 부족한 거 같아서 다시 써서 올립니다. 같은 토픽이지만 전 것과 반대의견으로 해봤는데 두 에세이 다 첨삭 부탁드립니다.^^ 감사합니다
Some people think that daily basis assignment is needed to students. However, I have a different idea. I believe that giving daily basis homework is burdensome for students. First of all, they require getting rid of stress. Secondly, students can develop the social capability which is important than personal study or work.
To begin with, daily-assignment is very stressful for students. Nowadays, students suffer from stress because of their competitive school life. In this situation, having constant homework without break is burdensome for them. They will be hard to acquire time to relieve their stress. If the teacher allows children to the proper amount of assignment, they can focus on their study easier. For example, according to research from the University of Maryland, the result was very intriguing. The degree of student's stress is proportionate to their lacks of spare time. Moreover, 80% of more the students replied to interview that the 3 at a week is the most appropriate amount of assignment.
On top of that, not offering daily basis homework to students is effective in increasing their social skills as they have time to meet their friends rather than devote to study. Social ability is regarded very important in today society. If the students spend with their friends, they can naturally learn the effective way to interact with other people. For instance, when I was an elementary student, I had numerous assignments so I had hard to hang out with my friends. Therefore, I could not become closing with my friends so I had a hard time to when I need a friend's help. However, after my teacher reduced the amount of the assignment, I could enjoy various activities and became close to my friends and more enjoy a school life. By sharing same experience and memory, I could understand each other deeply and learned the effective way to interact with others. Since today's work requires interaction with others because of its very complex, this experience will be very helpful for student.
To sum up, students can relieve stress and improve their social ability by having a proper amount of assignment.
In this regard, I agree that the students have a proper spare time rather than have a daily basis homework.