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Some people think that daily homework does not is not necessary helpful to students. However, I have a different idea. First of all, they can feel a sense of accomplishment. Secondly, they can improve their academic performance effectively.
To begin with, by doing homework everyday, they can feel a sense achievement. Since this homework allows students to get a constant experience of success from small efforts, they can feel a sense of achievement and confidence in even any small ordinary situation. For example, when I was an elementary school, my teacher gave me to math homework everyday. It was comprised of an easy problem to solve without any burdensome, I could devote to my work with confidence without any stress. Also, teacher praised my efforts in order to do this homework, I could feel a sense of accomplishment. Thanks to this experience, I could learn the value of small and consistent efforts in order to succeed. This value and experience made me improve the ability to find a chance of small accomplishment in even failure or hard time.
On top of that, By doing an everyday-homework related their class on after school, they can have an opportunity to check thoroughly what they learned. This experience can improve understanding of their class and have a positive influence on their academic performance too. For instance, according to research that comparing two elementary school's students, It's result was very intriguing. The students who had a daily homework tended to 80% more higher task-obsession and spent double of time to re-check their task than others. This habit will allow students to have a high performance in their work.
To sum up, students can feel a sense of achievement and they can increase their academic performance better.
In this regard, I agree that students have to have a daily assignment.
Good: 24~30
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