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Some people think that it is better to buy domestic products rather than foreign products regardless of expense, while other people think that differently. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views, but If I have to choose one, I would say that buying domestic products is much better than buying foreign products regardless of cost. There are several reasons and examples as follow. First of all, when consumers purchase domestic products, jobs are created for the country’s citizens, The increased demand for domestic products causes the company to make more goods, Which means that the company have to hire more workers. For example, the US government conducted a study to prove for connections between demand for domestic goods and national employment rate. To illustrateing, they researched and read a large amount of materials related to economy. The result of the study was that a three percent in consumer spending on American products gave rise to unemployment rate in the country to fall by a two percent. On top of that, buying domestic goods results in economic growth. This is because the profits that are generated by the sale of these products remain in the country, and the profits can be used for new development. My country is a good example of this phenomenon. The cars made by domestic manufacturer become very popular, resulting in increased profits for the company. And the chief of the company announced that their increased benefits will be used to establish research institution and to develop hybrid and electric-power engines. Consequently, the engine of the company become better and the engine become more popular all over the world. As a result, increased export profits resulted in the country’s economic growth. In brief, I firmly believe that the advantages of buy domestic goods regardless of cost far weigh its disadvantages for the reason I have mentioned before. All in all, the importance of the purchasing national products cannot be underestimated in a country’s economic growth.
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