▶ Your Answer : In he reading passage, there is ample support for the author's point that thanks to merits of coal, the use of coal is continued in the future. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reason as a rebuttal to the author's point. First of all, the professor insists that a mining is complicated process, since coal near the surface is limited, and exhausted. So miners have to dig the groung deeper, which means it needs higher technical skills. This refutes the reading passage's claim that mining is easy way to dig because coal is buried near the surface of ground, and do not need professional mechanics. Secondly, the professor argues that a shipping coal takes a significant amount of costs since coal is very heavy and bulky. Therefore, it is more expensive to ship coal than other types of energy sources. This contradicts the reading passage's assertion that because there is no safety issue in transportation of coal, its cost is lower than other energy source such as oil, natural gas, and hydrogen. Finally, the professor suggests that since new mining machines are provided to the coal industry, there is much less need for workers. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that a new job sector is needed for the coal industry, including workers in the mining, and others for the maintenance.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리디오가 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박하는 지를 보여주는 거 같습니다. 리딩에 대한 부분을 지금 이 에세이는 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 리딩에 대한 부분을 서술하는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셧습니다. |