▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that the hammerhead shark's head has some evolutionary merits. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that hammer shark's head shape do does (head shape는 단수 주어 입니다) not intensify ability to see. This is because it It (this is because는 적절한 표현이 아닙니다) could be only applied when it view distant objects. views distant objects (it는 단수 주어 입니다) Also it can not see things right in front of it. So, sometimes it can not view some preys and obstacles. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the hammerhead shark's unique head shape enhance its vision.
Next, the professor insists that hammer shark's head shape does not affect its ability to smell. Its sense of smell are similar with other shark's. A type of sharks is even better have an ability to smell. an ability to smell If only a little amount of blood is in a swimming pool which is as big as Olympic pool, the shark notice where the blood come from. This counters the reading passage's assertion that the form of the shark's head gives it better sense of smell.
Finally, the professor argues that the hammerhead's special head shape makes the shark turn easily. Actually, the shark does not use its head when it steers. It uses its flexible backbone to turn quickly. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that the shark uses its head to go other direction quickly.
점수: 23 일단 문법적인 부분에 있어서는 단수 복수 주어에 따른 동사 형태에 대하여서 문제가 있습니다. 항상 이 부분을 숙지하면서 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 또한 전체적으로 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족합니다. 한 문장으로 리딩에 대한 정보를 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |