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The lecturer argues that the US government
should not maintain special payment which is paying more to farmers who have
more outputs, while the reading states that we can conclusively say that it is necessary
for the government to pay such farmers.
To
begin with, the professor supports that it does not stabilize the food supply,
because some crops like corns are used for extracting oils, and it is does not
increasing increase the amount of food supplied to people. However, the reading does not
agree with the lecture. Since farming is highly depended depends on the weather, the
amount of output can be vary. As farmers can get benefits from it, they tend to
work hard to grow more crops, and it results in a balanced food supply.
Besides,
the lecture suggests that it actually increases the price of some of the crops instead
of lowering it. The professor states that it does lower the price as the reading
contended, but as because the government only gives benefits to farmers that produce for certain crops such as corns,
and wheat, farmers only tend to cultivate these crops more than others a lot. So, the overall price (of what?) rises with only a few exceptions.
Finally,
the lecturer notes that it (토픽 센텐스에서는 대명사를 쓰지 않습니다 it을 풀어서 써주세요) does not help economic growth. In contrast, the
reading argues that farmers hire many workers during the land cultivation and
it can help people in financial hardships and supports economic growth, but the
professor’s final point provides an alternative explanation which is that farmers buy
more machines instead of hiring more people, and it only benefits benefitting owners (of what?) only.
In conclusion, it is controversial
whether the US government should maintain special payments for farmers, but and the
lecturer suggests that it is not necessary for farmers because of the following
reasons I mentioned above.
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