▶ Your Answer : The reading passage asserts that mima mounds were formed with three main theories. However, the lecturer totally refutes the passage by stating that there is no exact evidence of mima mounds. To begin with, lecturer maintains that, there was no evidence of native’s artifacts. This is antagonistic to the reading passage's claim that mima mounds were created by various native American thrives in the past. Furethermore, in the lecture, he contends, a lot of sites for mima mounds were found and these places were stable. It meant that formation aren't result of seismic activity. This however, completely contradicts a point of the reading passage that earthquakes somehow changed the surface of the land. In the last, the lecturer entirely rebuts the reading passage, which argues gophers created mima mounds, by mentioning no one witnessed gopher's building home.
점수: 21 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 어떻게 반박하고 비교하는 지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 내용이 부족합니다. 두 정보들 모두 구체적으로 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |