▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that improving school can be the most effective to develop a country. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, economic problems should be solved before handling schools' matters. To be specific, it is necessary for schools to be invested. If it were not for money, there would be no investment. Consequently, it would be impossibe to make school improvement come true. A study was conducted by the Korea University in 2000 to determine whether invetment on schools could direct to the progress of a country. There were two groups of countries monitored. The first group was formed of countries that put money to solve their economic problem in advance. The other group consisted of those invested on educational field at first. The researchers compared the outcomes and reported that the former achieved splendid progress while the latter did not. Since the former accumulated money beforehand, they could put those to schools, which made them be developed as a whole. This study demonstrated that economic matter ought to be dealt with, and this would provide a healthy basis for the progress.
On top of that, cultural progress has an magnificent impact on the progrss of a country. To explain, people nowadays can have opportunities to contact other countries' cultures. What this means is that a country can make a lot of money with the export of their culture, such as songs, movies. For example, I will talk about my friend who is Japaness. When I was in high school, I made a pal named Koda through the exchange student program that Korea and Japan agreed with each other. She was very fond of K-pops. She spent most of her break time watching K-pop music video or live show. Even she went to Korea to see her favorite K-pop star's live performance with her friends who also liked the K-pop star. They stayed for a week, and also enjoyed Korean food, place, other cultures. Those expense they spent would helpful to the economy of Korea. Since the K-pop populariy phenomenon is world wide, Korea would earn a billions by selling it. From this experience, I realized that cultural impact can have a strong effect on the progress of a country.
To sum up, economic problem should be solved before and cultural success can be more impact than educational matter on the economic problem. In this regard, I firmly believe that investment on schoolscan not be the most effective for the progress.
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