▶ Your Answer :
The
reading passage contends that there are several plausible reasons for why whales
becomes stranded on the beach. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up a few
points that contradict this argument.
First
of all, the lecturer points that the assertion that whales become stranded
because of wind patterns is just wrong. This is attributed to the fact that
these kinds of stranding happen even in areas where various patterns of wind
breeze. For example, there are whales stranded on the eastern beach of United States.
However, the orientation of wind in that area points to the ocean, not shore.
This refutes the author’s point that whale-stranding is because of wind caused by wind.
Moreover,
in the lecture, the point is made that illness doesn’t does not make whales come ashore.
This is because there are case is a case in which healthy whales are stranded on beach.
Also, many stranded whales are able to swim back to ocean without any help.
This casts doubt on the idea in the reading passage that whale-stranding is due
to illnesses.
The final point made by the lecturer is that
the features of shore line couldn’t could not be the reason of whale-stranding. It was discovered
that only some of whales get lost in certain coastlines, not every whale. In addition,
the very kind of whale which inhabits around the geologically complex coastlines
is not the one becoming stranded most. This is different from the passage’s
view that the reason whales become disoriented and stranded is the geological
feature of coastlines. Good: 24~30 점수: 24 대채로 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝을 적절하게 잘 비교하였습니다. 하지만 아쉬운 부분이 두 곳이 있습니다. 첫 번째는 문법적 오류입니다. 제가 첨삭한 것을 보고 확인 하시길 바랍니다. 두 번째는 리딩에 대한 정보입니다. 한 문장으로 리딩에 정보를 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박 할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시는 것이 좋을거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |