▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there are several fuctions (철자 오류가 상당히 많이 보이는 편인데, 파란색으로 표시해드릴테니 어떠한 글자가 잘못되었는지 꼭 직접 확인해보시고 정확한 스펠링을 익혀주세요!) of the male deer's antler are mentioned. However, the professor in the lecture argues that the anthler's function is not exactly proved exactly.
To begin with, the professor contends that the antler is not an important way to attract female deer (deer 는 단수형과 복수형이 deer 로 동일합니다. 다른 부분도 다 deer 로 수정해주세요!). The antler is not a key way to select sexual partner, and there are scores of other methods to attract mates. Most of male deers typically use other methods such as vocalization. Also famale deers often choose mates which have only small anthlers. This refutes the reading passage's claim that antler is a main mainly used to attract mates.
Secondly, the professor argues that most of deers mark their territory by their strong scent, secretion, not rather than by using antlers. Markings by anthlers is are easy to be removed by deer's soft outskin. So (문장을 and but so 로 시작하지 말아주세요!) visual warining is not an effiecient way to dicourages other deer to intrude. This refutes the reading passage's claim that markings by antler are used not only to mark deer's territory but also to warn other males.
Finally, the professor insists that antelrs are not significant functions to protect from predators. He says antlers are too soft to attack predators. Also most of female deers without an antler are always with their yoong deers which need protection. This means the anthler is not a defense measure. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that deer protect themselves from predators using anthlers to drive off the attackers.
총평: 철자 오류가 되게 많은 편입니다. 다 파란색으로 표시해드렸으니 꼭 직접 어떠한 부분이 문제가 되었는지 확인해주시고 올바른 표현을 익혀주세요. 그리고 통합형의 경우 어느정도 리스닝에 더 중점을 두어야하는 것은 맞지만 비중이 너무 기울어도 문제가 되므로 적절히 조절해주실 필요가 있어요. 수고하셨습니다 :)
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