■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : According to the reading, there is ample support for author's claim that many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First of all, the professor contends that four-day work forces company spend a lot amount of money. This is because company have to hire new workers and this process would be costly. Moreover, they provide trainig and medical insurance for people who newly come. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the shortend workweek would increase company profits. Next, the professor insists that many jobs will not be avaliable. This is beacause the company will expect people who worked four days compelte their works as similar amount of five day workers. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that it would reduce unemployment rates. Finally, the professor argues that working four days would present risk. This is because four day work can reduce the quality of life by harming their chance to advanced careers. So people who worked four days a week will lose their job during downturn. This counters reading passage's assertion that four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. reading passage를 적게 적는건 알겠는데 너무 짧습니다. 그래도 조금은 더 할애해주세요. 어휘가 많이 기본적인 편이긴 합니다. 조금 더 다양하게 표현 바꿔가며 쓸 수 있도록 해주세요. 그리고 spelling오류 많은데, spelling도 굉장히 중요합니다. proof reading잊지 말고 해주세요
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