▶ Your Answer :
Some
people might say that risky job is better than secure job because it pays more. (이건 잘못된 문장입니다. 맨 앞에 그냥 risky job이라고만 했기때문에 진짜 그냥 risky job인걸로 보입니다. 모든 risky job이 돈을 많이 주는건 아니에요. 여기서 high salary risky job이라고 했으면 그대로 paraphrase해서 적어주세요. 첫 문장인만큼 자세하게 주장 설명해주세요. ) However, in my opinion, stable job is rather good for people than risky job.
Because instable occupation makes people anxious. Also, we can be accustomed to
get a low salary.
To
begin with, unstable job easily worsens people’s healthy mind. It could make
people imagine a specific circumstance such as getting fired and underestimated
in their workplace. This kind of imagination utterly effects people’s mind,
especially mental health. Even though someone is strong minded, people could be
depressed when exposed unstable environment.
For
example, a study conducted by Industrial Sociology Institute in Ewha womans
university showed that how stability of labor affects people’s mind. Researchers
examined comparative study between people in risky job with high salary and
stable job with low salary. The study demonstrated that people who worked at
low stability is more likely to be depressed even though they earned twice than
the other group which worked at high stability with paid less.
On top of that,
human is social animal, which means we are inclined to be accustomed with our
laid environment. It means although we earned low salary, if it meets mere
subsistence, we could be adoptable with that situation.
For example, when
I was in graduate school, student was my status and studying was my job. (좀 더 다르게 표현 가능해보입니다) The
only thing way I could earn money by was to be a teaching assistant and research
assistant. And this part time job gave me 600,000 won per month. It was
literally minimum income which would be affordable only by myself. During my
master’s degree, I’d should get used to this low income. Consequently, I was
perfectly accustomed to my low salary and finished my degree without big
obstacle. Some friends of mine had been worried about and regarded my low
salary as an obstacle for my graduate degree, it was not big deal for me at
all. To sum up, there are some reasons that I think
secure occupation is better than insecure. First, unstable job could make
people depressed. Second, when it comes to money, people could get used to live
with low income. That’s why I hardly believe that low salary, but stable job is
much better than high salary with unstable job.
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