▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage. there are ample support to the author's claim that there are clear proofs that the deterioration of the Hohokam civilization. However, the professor gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's points. First, the professor contends that the devastating flooding was not the reason of their end. The flooding was common incident in the reason. They Knew how to repair their place from flooding. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the Hohokam civilization ended in destroying because of flooding. Next, the professor insists that in terms of time period, it is not correct that the European brought diseases to America. The Spanish came to the Hohokam society, after the society had disappear. This counters the reading passage's assertion that the Hohokam people lack the immune system of epidemic that came from European. Finally, the professor argues that there were not revolting leaders as well as leaders. The archaeologist could not find tomb or dwelling site that the evidence of existing ruling class. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that it is clear that the internal conflict is the main reason of the civilization's collapse.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부부을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리스닝에 대한 설명은 구체적으로 잘 하셨으나. 리딩에 대한 부분을 한 문장으로만 서술하고 끝나셨습니다. 한 문장으로 리딩에 대한 부분을 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |