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Most people think that it is a waste of time to try several minor jobs so that they say that it is better to focus on preparing for a long-term job. However, I believe that it would be greatly beneficial for young people to give it a try to experience lots of jobs and careers before they decide a long-term job or career. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, it can be a great experience to get a satisfying long-term job. Generally, people who have lots of experiences in many fields have more chances to be successful because they know how to overcome hardships thanks to their various experiences. For example, my uncle Kevin, is a civil servant who is in a high position. Actually, he had been in various occupations, such as a English teacher and a manager in the restaurant, before he became an officer. He says that he really loves his current job because he was able to realize that he is good at writing and dealing with documents rather than teaching someone or managing the store. On top of that, young people can indeed enjoy their lives. In general, young people want to try as many things as they can, like being a vocal in the band or painting a picture and I was also one of the people like them. In my case, for instance, as I graduated from the college, I suddenly made a decision to join a rock band for a half of year since being a guitarist in a band had been my dream for a long time. It was totally different from what I had studied in collegeㅡthe physicsㅡbut I was greatly happy to experience such a fantastic career. Though now I am a scientist, I would extremely feel regrets about what I did not do if I did not join a band. To summarize what I mentioned above, I am for the notion that it is a good way to do many jobs and careers before they get a long-term job. Therefore, nothing in mind casts doubt in my resolute standpoint regarding given statement.
질문1) 항상 첨삭해주셔서 정말 감사합니다 ㅠㅠ 궁금한 점이 있는데, 시험은 다가오는데 아직도 영작 실력은 꽝이고 ...ㅠ 2개의 바디를 시간 내에 쓰려고 하면 굉장히 디테일 같은 게 엉성해지는 기분인데 차라리 1개의 바디를 다소 길고 자세하게 쓰는 게 높은 점수를 받는데 있어서 괜찮은 대안이 될 수 있을까요? |