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It is debatable whether doing several tasks at once is better than doing tasks one at a time. It is an (관사) intriguing question because argument concerning this topic can be different relying on the individual perspective. In my opinion, however, I support that doing several tasks at once is better.
First, doing several tasks at once helps people to gain a necessary skills to succeed. It creates (주어 동사 불일치) opportunities for people to multitask their works, as a result it allows people to achieve lot of outputs. To be specific, as modern society is becoming increasingly competitive, today's world requires people with multitasking and having productive ability. The only key to multitask would be to practice. People can do this by always focusing on the various works at the same time. To illustrate, Steve jobs, who is the founder of Apple, made great accomplishments in his lifetime. I read online that he was very successful because he learned about how to manage his tight schedule and achieve a huge amount of his works. He did this by working a tasks at the same time.
Second, it makes our lives more efficient and satisfying. To be specific, by multitasking people can save extra time, and it makes people to work other things. If you waste time doing tasks one at time, will time wait for you? The answer is "no". in the world we live in, the time is gold. Since you cannot turn time back, we must to save lot of time and use it for other productive working. For example, when I was a high school student, I was in a council in the school. In the exam period, I had to do so many things, like a studying for exam or writing paper, and preparing council meeting. Though I wanted to do tasks one at time, I had not enough time. So, inevitably I worked at the same time. However, by doing tasks at the same time, I could save lot of time. Even I could make extra time. So I could more work completely, and finished all tasks perfectly. Trough this experience, I realized that multitasking was very useful for today's busy people to save time.
All things considered, I firmly believe that doing several tasks at once is better. It is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with reasons mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge effect on our future.
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