▶ Your Answer : The
reading's author argues that giving incentives for company as a mean of
stimulating economic growth creates many positive outcomes for locals.
The
lecturer contradicts the reading passage's claim that there are some drawbacks.
First
of all, the author argues that it will expand the tax revenue available for
local investment. The lecturer refutes the reading passage and assert that this
case are not adapted real life. The lecturer explains that tax revenue will
decrease because of tax rebate. The companies that are offered incentives give
less tax and this is not increase tax revenue.
In
addition, according to the author, using incentives to attract business can
create many new jobs for local people. The lecturer rebuffs the reading passage
and argues that this is not true. The lecturer maintains that new companies
will compete local companies. It means that one of them will downsize and
result in job loses.
Final point made by the author is that it will be beneficial to the
local environment. By offering
green incentives to companies that use environmentally sustainable business
practices, governments can lure entrepreneurs who are interested in strating
green companies. The lecturer
disagree the reading passage and contends that they do not help local
environment. The lecturer says that although green companies will release small
amount of gas, it will not help local's environment.
점수: 28 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 가지고 있는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 구체적이고 단락화를 잘 했습니다. 특히 paraphrase를 잘하셔서 각 페세지가 무엇에 대해서 서로 반박을 하는 지를 잘 알 수 있었습니다. 잘 서술하였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |