▶ Your Answer : There is a controversial issue
regarding whether getting advice from friends who are older than us is more valuable
or not. After pondering upon the two possible opinions from several aspects, I
personally agree with the idea that advice from older friends is more worthy
for following two reasons. First of all, advice from older friends
is helpful for save time and energy. Specifically speaking, these advice leads
us to get a good plan so that we do not lose energy. For example, my brother
who was preparing SAT test, he had difficulty studying mathematics test. To got
a high score, he asked some advice from his older friend who had already done five
years ago. Afterwards, my brother set a great planning based on his advice and was
able to study efficiently. As a result, my brother received the highest mark on
the test, also achieved to enter the university he wanted to go. This shows
that carefully listening advice from older friends is better because we can
deal with it efficiently.
Second of all, we can figure out significant
problems through advice. This is because not only we may miss our critical
flaws but also we lose chance to fix it. For instance, my sister who is college
student asked her older friend to fix punctuations of her final essay. Since her
friend had many experiences of tutoring center, my sister could get a better
result through valuable advice from her older friends. In contrast, my friend, Lee
thought that older people had biased thinking and old ideas. So, she did not
ask for help even though she was not sure about her results. Consequently, she found
a lot of mistakes after submitting essay, it caused low mark of her academic record.
Therefore, if my friend had asked advice from older friends, she would have not encountered
such a worst situation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe
that my standpoints of the two reasons are sufficiently convincing. The first
is getting advice from friends who are older than us is instrumental because it
would prevent us from wasting time and energy. The second is asking advice will
produce better results. In this regard, getting advices from older friend is the best way to get a great result. |