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102. Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
School days in human life are one of the most valuable moments for it allows people to expand their intellectual power and to learn about the society. Teachers in every type of school such as pre-schools, high schools, and even university, play a crucial role for their students to become eligible social members. They should be able to meet the demands of students in the sense of academic knowledge and morality. Hence, the evaluation of teachers is not something optional, but something should take place no matter what. For the most effective evaluation, I strongly believe that students should be a part of the evaluation process because they are the ones who know their teachers are eligible to teach them.
One of the most important duties for teachers in school is that they should be able to teach students. In other words, they should be intellectually eligible to teach. If teachers are not helpful in enhancing the intellectual ability of students, then they are not entitled to be a teacher in the first place. However, the proper evaluation of teaching school can only be evaluated by students not by other people such as principals or other teachers in the school. If students are not involved in the process of teacher evaluation, then the teaching ability of a bad teacher could not be properly evaluated. This poorly performed evaluation will make students suffer for their entire academic life. For instance, I knew a teacher from my senior high school, who used a teaching material from twenty years ago. Of course, his class was one of the most boring classes. However, my school did not have the system that students can participate in the teacher evaluation. Not long ago, I met a person who recently graduated from the same school. He told me that the teacher still use the same material.
Another important quality of being good teachers is that they should lead their students by examples. This can also be only viewed objectively by the eyes of students which are why students should be a part of the evaluation process of their teacher. Some teachers say one thing and do another, for example. One of my high school friends told me a story about one of his teachers. He used to talk about how important it is to maintain the high moral standard. However, he was a notorious teacher who would take a bribe from the parents of students by promising he would give special care for the parents' son. These kinds of behavior are certainly harmful for students and should be eliminated in school. This would be possible by including the students in the evaluation of teachers.
In sum, school should allow students to evaluate their teachers because they are the ones who can see how good the teachers are in the closest possible ways. In addition, they are the ones who are mostly affected by those mischievous teachers.