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Depending on personal experience, there might
be different opinions where is better place to have food. Some people feels feel that eating at food stands is more convenient, while others think restaurants
are the best place to enjoy their meals. Although both types of places have
distinct advantages and disadvantages, I strongly prefer to eat at food stands
for the following reasons.
To begin with, people can save their time by
eating at a foods stands. People today live in a very busy circumstance. In
this kind of world, managing their time is very important factor to become
competitive. For example, my uncle has been working in a financial company. He
cannot spend enough time to have his meal at a restaurant because he should
keep his eyes on the computer monitor. So, he always told me food stands is
optimized place to save his time. Besides, He do does not need to worry about if the
restaurant can be reserved at a time that we want or not.
Secondly, food stands give people more choices
to select foods. We can easily watch a lot of food stands and food trucks are
around us. For example, in my city, food stands became an indispensable part of
city events, such as movie festivals, beer festivals etc. As a result, people
can taste much more kind of foods than before. In a restaurant, we have to
choose our food in a limited range of menu. However, I can eat a Japanese
sushi, while my friends have a T-born steak in food stands
In
conclusion, I can obviously say that I prefer to have a food at a food stands
for the reasons that I have mentioned above. Of course, enjoying a formal food
with a nice environments is also pleasant experience. However, we cannot go to
the restaurant every day. Therefore, in a general situation, having meals at
food stands is more beneficial for us.
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