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The lecturer believes that the assertion of the reading passage on the serious problems and limitations faced by the science of archaeology in the United Kingdom is unconvincing. She provides the following three reasons to challenge the author's claims. (Ambiguous meaning) First, the lecturer asserts that, in 1990, new rules and guideline were acted to preserve sites in UK that have archaeological values and interests before or during constructions. (So that?) To be specific, any construction sites should be examined by archaeologists whether or not there are archaeological values and interests in the sites before the constructions. For example, the UK government, builders, and archaeologists should discuss plans for preserving the sites if there are archaeological items, excavation plans, and plans for documentations before the constructions. This point argues against the first assertion of the reading passage that many archaeological items were lost due to construction projects. Second, the speaker contends that the financial support is not insufficient (to what?) because construction companies are in charge of paying the initial investigation for artifacts and archaeological sites. She highlights that this financial resources are whole different from the government's financial resources, so normally archaeologists nowadays do not experience financial hardship. This contradicts the author's claim that many archaeologists have had hard time to have sufficient financial support because there funds mostly come from the UK government. Finally, the lecturer contends that there are many jobs that require professional archaeological knowledge and skills. (So then?) These paid jobs are newly created for research, professional investigation, and archaeological documentation and publication. Thus, increase of such paid jobs is the highest ever been in UK. This directly casts doubt on the last point of the reading passage that there are not sufficient paid jobs associated to archaeology in UK.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Score | Fair 15-18 | - 통합형 에세이는 독립형 형태의 에세이가 아닌, summary요약으로 150-250 이내로 분량을 맞춰주시는 것이 중요합니다. - Topic sentence에서는 lecturer 의 주장이 명백히 드러나야 합니다. - 대부분 인과관계의 연결없이 factual information만이 서술이 되어 있습니다.
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