Opinions might be divided over whether it is important
to use land for human needs than for saving endangered animals. People of
diverse ages and from different walks of life may take diverse positions on
this controversial issue. Personally, I think that we should use land for
endangered animals and not for human needs
because we should save lots of animals and preserve our ecosystem.
To begin with, even now, many animals are decreasing
in number because of human activities, such as hunting and farming. The decreased
number of creatures results is resulting in
the disruption of the food chain and the ecological circular system. Thus, we must save
endangered species. We are obliged to hand down the earth to our next
generation. Opponents of my perspective claim that people should meet their
needs first because they can save endangered animals later. Advocates’ claims may sound reasonable on the
surface. However, if we take a closer look at their contentions, the rational
for their assertion lacks logic in many ways. Moreover, I have a personal
example which can debunk their claim. In my
hometown Gumi, there was a bird sanctuary, which was a very large plain and
many migratory birds came to every winter, so I could see many kinds of
birds flying. However, a few years ago, construction companies rushed to build
new apartment buildings without considering how the birds live in winter. As a
results, they lost their resting place, and have never come to Gumi
again. (comma를 많이
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In addition, beyond my personal example, there are
many articles which can support my argument. They expressed doubts that are
similar to my point of view. A few weeks ago, I had a chance to read an article
from the Dong-A Daily News that is related to the topic. It described the
results of a survey conducted by the Seoul National University ecological
researchers with more than five hundred zoologists working in many other
countries as respondents. According to the
article, of the 500 zoologists surveyed more than 80 percent of them answered
that approximately more than 100,000 species of animals have disappeared for 20
years, and this rate will be continuously growing continuously grow. They went on to say that nobody exactly knows what why the accelerated extinction works on earth, where
human and other creatures live together, the exact
cause for the accelerated extinction of species; so it is quite
important to find solution to stop this phenomenon.
As
mentioned above, based on the examples, I can conclude that It is more
important to use land for human needs such as farming, industry than for saving
endangered animals. (결론은 아예 본론이랑 반대되는 입장입니다)