▶ Your Answer : The lecture says that creating synthetic horn won’t be helpful in protecting rhinoceros. This casts doubt on reading passage’s argument that it would be really effective. Firstly, the speaker asserts that, in Asia, rhino horn reflects one’s status. Also, if access in rhino horn increase, people may find new usage on it. For example, there is a beer made by buffalo powder, and company can make rhino horn powder beer, too. This contradicts the reading passage’s assertment that, synthetic rhino horns will make real ones worthless, since they are both identical, and it may cause reduction in the price of real ones. Secondly, the lecturer claims that, if drugstore advertise that real rhino horns and synthetic ones are same, people may feel suspicious on it. Even, some may feel that real ones are much more better. So, they may try harder to obtain real ones and as a consequence, the number of rhino killing will increase. This rebuts the reading passage’s statement that, there is no medical evidence on rhino horn’s benefit, and if synthetic horn is identical with real ones, people may tend to buy it. As a result, they don’t need to kill any rhinoceros. Thirdly, the professor argues that, international customs agents may have much more difficulty in separating real horns and synthetic ones since they are both identical. It means that, for horn smugglers, illegally selling it would become much easier. This rebuffs the argument made by the reading passage that, synthetic horns may decrease the pressure on park rangers. This is due to the fact that if the supply of the horns increase, demand of it will decrease, and as a result, the poachers will decrease.
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