■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
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Some people think that luck has important to the success of objective. However, I have a different idea. First of all, they could not make an achievement without based on their ability even they had a lucky chance. Secondly, luck is very uncertain substances.
To begin with, the proper ability is foremost thing in order to accomplish success. Succeeding in one field require the professional skill and knowledge in order to make a high performance than their peers. Hence, the people who succeed in their job made a lot of efforts to increase their ability rather than depending on luck. Moreover, if they experienced temporal succeed due to the lucky event, they have a hard to handle their tasks so they could not maintain their success and fame. For example, people easily can see the celebrity who sustain their success long period attribute their accomplishment to efforts through an interview. successful people have a tendency to make a thorough effort to improve their strong point and decrease shortage. My country's famous badminton player Kim is well known for excellent serve skill. According to her interview, she always spends a 6 hour at a day to maintain serve ability. Also, she said that since the badminton is the game that changes easily, it is reluctant to depend on luck.
On top of that, the possibility for success relying on the lucky event is very low. Since the people can not control their environment, whoever could not predict the occurrence of the lucky event at the adjust time. For instance today, a lot of new business company is launching. However, there only a few of people can succeed to work because the many people who have a similar idea and items compete simultaneously. Their service quality shows the continuous increase in order to win the competition. Hence, the possibility for success in own fields is decreasing every year. If the people try to success depending on their luck, they could not achieve the accomplishment.
To sum up, expert skill is the more important factor of success rather than luck. Also, depending on luck is very difficult.
In this regard, I agree with the luck is not an important factor for the success.