▶ Your Answer : [intro 한 문단으로 합쳐주세요]
The lecturer asserts that the theories
suggested in the reading are groundless.
This casts doubt on the reading’s passage
that there are plausible theories to explain what drives the this process of
sailing stones.
[body1 한 문단으로 합쳐주세요]
To begin with, the lecturer states that a
combination of ice and wind does not transport the stones.
To explain, powerful winds speed has never been
recorded and digital maps shows that the tracks are do not parallel to each other.
This is in contradiction contradictory to the reading’s
point that the stones are transported by a combination of ice and wind.
[body2 한 문단으로 합쳐주세요]
In addition, the speaker maintains that the
movement of the stones is not caused by gravity.
This is because the stones moved from lower
point to higher point. And it is impossible to move the stone uphill.
This rebuts rebuffs the reading passage’s
insistence that gravity causes the movement of stones.
Comment : 대립포인트가 두 가지만 제시되는 문제도 있어서 대립 포인트가 두 가지라고 생각하고 채점했는데, 혹시 세 가지 포인트로 대립하고 있는지 원지문 확인해보시면 좋을 것 같아요. 각 본론에서 대립되는 포인트나 설명은 잘 파악된 것 같은데, 품사오류가 많아 전달력이 약하다는 점이 아쉽습니다. 원래 지문 내용을 알지 못해서 우선 현재시제 그대로 체크했는데, 시제도 과거형으로 써야 하는 것은 아닌지도 지문 체크해보시면 좋을 것 같아요. 실제 지문과 비교하면서 빠진 detail은 없는지, 잘못 파악된 내용은 없는지 한 번 더 검토해주세요~ 수고 많으셨습니다~!
Integrated Writing Rubrics Score 3.5/5 A response at this level contains some important information from the lecture and conveys some relevant connection to the reading, but it is marked by one or more of the following : - Although the overall response is definitely oriented to the task, it conveys only vague, global, unclear, or somewhat imprecise connection of the points made in the lecture to points made in the reading. - The response may omit one major key point made in the lecture. - Some key points made in the lecture or the reading, or connections between the two, may be incomplete, inaccurate, or imprecise. - Errors of usage and/or grammar may be more frequent or may result in noticeably vague expressions or obscured meanings in conveying ideas and connections.
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